【话题作文】
Some people think that men and women should be equal in a country's
police force and military force; while others think that women are not
suitable to do such work. Discuss both views and give your own
opinion.

【冯老师点评】
这是之前考过的题目。纯粹的旧题重现！！！所以大家一定要多看以前考过的经典题目。我的课堂补充资料和博客。http://blog1.ielts.com.cn/blog/index.php?uid-34-noframe-1

话题内容：属于社会话题中关于弱势群体的内容。 总体思路是一定要支持弱势群体。所以，这篇文章的观点应该倾向于支持女性应该享有和男性平等的权利。
结构分析： 属于讨论类四段式。 首段+主体段（2个）+末段 。
在主体段中，先写自己不赞成的一方，采用两边倒的方式。再写自己赞成的一方，同样也是两边倒的方式。
【写作思路】
因为是社会话题，所以从以下四个角度中选择适合本题的方向。
A：经济角度
B：科技角度
C: 社会角度
D：公众个人角度
就本题而言，从B、D两个角度比较合理。

女性不适合的原因：
D： 在大家看来，女性在身体和意志力上都比较柔弱，可能不适合这样艰辛的工作。
但是，随着时代的变化， 当兵或警察再也不是纯粹的体力工作。这些职业应该具备更多别的重要技能。

女性应该当兵或警察的原因：
B： 科技角度： 现在很多人提倡女性也可以参军或当警察，主要是因为现在的军队或警察队伍不再是以前那种单纯的武力部队，而是高科技的部队。所以，女性和男性一样都具备这样的素质去从事这样的职业。

D： 男性和女性在办事的能力上有差别，也就是说，他们相互之间可以形成互补，提高工作效率。
但是，女性也有不适合的地方，不能让她们承担一些不适合他们特长的工作。
思路点评：
大家从上面的构思过程中会发现，这两方观点之间是有关联的。要把双方主题句对立起来进行博弈，这样的文章结构才能更加紧密。不要完全脱离，各自说各自的。
【主题句写作】
   有了上述的构思，我们就要写主题句。主题句是文章的核心，所以，考生在备考的时候一定要重点练习。

什么样的主题句才是符合要求的？
１） 句式上多用复杂句；
２） 意思上包含主题词。
具体的内容大家可以参考我上课的资料。

写完主题句，就要去写支持句。支持句的特色是：
１）句式上可以是简单句；
２）　意思上是对主题句的展开。

我希望大家记住这样一个宗旨：　雅思写作一定不是堆砌辞藻和句式。应该是“句式上长短相加，意思上简单明确。
【最新例文】

Whether or not women should be treated equal in police or military
forces as their counterparts is a frequent topic of discussion when
gender equality has been cast in the spotlight these days.
Some claim that females are not competent for such occupations due
primarily to verified facts. First, it is commonly believed that they
are not physically strong enough to fulfill their job responsibility
because of the adverse working conditions. In the case of a military
training, soldiers have to take heavy exercises to get stronger to
shoulder the responsibility for safeguarding their nation. But, the
women fail to persist in it and meet the demand. However, accompanied
with the advances in science and technology, they can not only possess
stronger physical conditions, but keep up with the pace of times as
well.
Under such circumstances, others stand firm on this point that women
should be equal to men in those aspects. Firstly, as what have been
mentioned above, today’s army or police forces have been equipped with
advanced technology and profound knowledge. In other words, the
workers, women or men, have to master a wide range of skills in order
to cope with what is happening or will happen in their work. In front
of knowledge, gender is not an obstacle any more. Next, in the
civilized army or police, women should be given the same opportunities
as men for the simple reason that they can make up the disadvantages
of their counterparts, with the consequences of progress in the long
term. Or that, the women and men enjoy different merits of their own
so it is of necessity to offer them more opportunities to exercise
their edges. Nevertheless, it is not to say that women are versatile
to perform every position in the army and police, as it did in the
case of expenditures or crusades which are too tough for them. But,
this demerit can be dealt with. The solution is that they can be
screened out to take some clerical positions which are as important as
those technical ones.
In terms of what have been debated above, I am convinced that women
should be given the equal opportunity to join the army or police
because they can make contribution to a higher level of civilization
in the society.    (383字)